Since creating the storyboard and proposal, I have made a few small changes to my concept. Originally, I was going to have one main character interacting with a secondary character in the daydream, but I have decided that a second person adds an unnecessary level of complexity to a story intended to be simple. What this does is highlights the desire to be outdoors, enjoying the sun, warmth, and simply not being stuck inside, instead of confusing the idea with a character who hasn't been introduced or alluded to in any way. Also, I feel that the idea of time progressing in the daydream (sunset or definitive ending) doesn't add anything to the scene, so it's gone too.
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